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Well

Your name is Dan, my name is Dan. You make good music, I make... music...

I'm not sure where I'm going with that.

Song

Is just awesome. I love the part at about 1:10 where it just stops and then comes back in real fast. Great job.

To be honest

There were a few parts to be improved upon, a bit better tweeked synth and a few other drum beats would have been nice.

BUT. The melody was so unbelievably beautiful that I had to vote five. It was gorgeous, and just made me so happy. Great job kid.

Hmm....

It was pretty cool, and well made, but at some points I just couldn't really get into it. But I do like the style, it is REALLY original and it was well done for being so different. Not exactly my cup of tea but still a quality song none-the-less. Good job.

I listened to this

Because there is a great song by Earth Crisis called Firestorm. Listen to it sometime.

But anyways. I like the melody in this song a lot and the drums are really nice too. It's a very epic and inspiring melody. This song I really have no suggestions for you because it is actually very good.

I like

Guitar solos in techno songs :)

You got the diversity thing going here

And the beat changes up and such, and I do like the drums. Try to get more basic background noise to get it to sound thick and layered. A synth and bass following the beat here would do nicely just to add that thick sound.

This was actually pretty cool

But the loop gets a bit repetitive and I didn't really like the drums (especially the snare). If you change the melody up a bit a few times in it and fix the drum beats it would be amazing.

Well

It was a very good song. I like the beginning synth a lot. It's a bit repetitive though.

One thing you should do is add a kick drum whenever there is a build up crash hit. Crash symbols sound too treble-ish by themselves, and when you add a kick it gives it a more full sound.

Very catchy

I always enjoy good trance, and this song is very well done, especially for a first timer! One bit of constructive critisism, although you do use a wide variety of instruments, the melody tends not to change too much. In your next song you should definitly work on that a bit more. Great job!

Davirus responds:

Yeh!
The beat\drums are really repetitive how the song as well xD
Im planning to do a "extended" version of this one n_n

Thanks for comment!
Anyway this isn´t my first song in my live but yes in this year, but Im not good at "dinamic changes"

Thanks again =3

I'm Daniel Nusdeo. I produce progressive trance and techno under the alias Sedna. www.soundcloud.com/d jsedna

Daniel Nusdeo @xBrainchild

Age 36, Male

Resort Valet

Madison CT

Joined on 6/18/07

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